I guess the only advice I have is not to break up your paragraphs so much. I know it makes for easier reading on the web, but an average of 5-6 lines a paragragh is still short enough to read easily, and is a ton less choppy. And the pictures break it up nicely anyway.
Also use dates (or at least "fall of 99" or whatever) when you are doing a chronological piece like that. It makes it a lot easier to keep track of.
Farooq is the man so hit your knees and start praying!
Yeah that's them if they look like bootleg's. That's why they're so cheap. It's also the only way ROH could get their stuff into the stores. I geuss it's better then nothing but I can't see too many casual fans picking one up.