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The W - Pro Wrestling - Chokeslams & Fire!!!
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Since: 15.2.02
From: Dallas

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#1 Posted on

Now, I am new to this board (even tho I have been reading CRZ since

But I have decided to give the ol' wrestling article a try.

But I have few references (other than the few I read) and I'm looking for input.

I figure that this group of people could help me out.

I'm mainly fishing for ways to make my article better.

Here's the URL:

Then click on the Chokeslams & Fire!!! link.

Let me know...

(and yes, I know I suck, so you can spare me of that)


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Since: 6.1.02
From: Brooklyn, NY

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I guess the only advice I have is not to break up your paragraphs so much. I know it makes for easier reading on the web, but an average of 5-6 lines a paragragh is still short enough to read easily, and is a ton less choppy. And the pictures break it up nicely anyway.

Also use dates (or at least "fall of 99" or whatever) when you are doing a chronological piece like that. It makes it a lot easier to keep track of.


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Hmm..did you happen to have read Hulk Hogan's book? He says those sort of things...sounds like the usual HH hyperbole. About the guy dying..oh shit? that was for real? I figured it was an urban myth ;)
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