Maybe I'm just a sick and twisted individual, but I thought the Mae Young segment was GOLD. Eric Bischoff was hilarious screaming "Stick your tongue back in your mouth, you old hag!" whilst Mae was licking her lips and getting ready. Eric's reaction to the broncobuster (old mare buster?) was priceless as well. Austin stunning her out of nowhere was great too. Shades of the old Rattlesnake that I love.
I also have to commend HHH and Nash on a nice little HITC match. I loved the snake eyes onto the barbed wire and HHH stabbing Nash with the screwdriver. The only bad thing I'll say about this match was when HHH dumped all the tools at ringside, he had about 7 or 8 deadly weapons lying there. What does he pick up? The tray from inside the toolbox. That was irritating.
I guess the only advice I have is not to break up your paragraphs so much. I know it makes for easier reading on the web, but an average of 5-6 lines a paragragh is still short enough to read easily, and is a ton less choppy.