ThreepMe
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|  #1 Posted on 15.2.02 1606.34
Reposted on: 15.2.09 1629.04 | Hello,
Now, I am new to this board (even tho I have been reading CRZ since Wrestlemaniacs.com).
But I have decided to give the ol' wrestling article a try.
But I have few references (other than the few I read) and I'm looking for input.
I figure that this group of people could help me out.
I'm mainly fishing for ways to make my article better.
Here's the URL:
http://www.cyberpunkswebsite.com
Then click on the Chokeslams & Fire!!! link.
Let me know...
(and yes, I know I suck, so you can spare me of that)
Thanks!
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|  #2 Posted on 15.2.02 1722.18
Reposted on: 15.2.09 1729.12 | I guess the only advice I have is not to break up your paragraphs so much. I know it makes for easier reading on the web, but an average of 5-6 lines a paragragh is still short enough to read easily, and is a ton less choppy. And the pictures break it up nicely anyway.
Also use dates (or at least "fall of 99" or whatever) when you are doing a chronological piece like that. It makes it a lot easier to keep track of.
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